(its a story i made up about jeff the killer and i need error seers to tell me about error i made in here anyway enjoy)

as i was walking down a long road i look around as i see mist and the sky as black as a blackberry. the road is as gray as a stone and the road seemed endless but as i walked on i felt a gust of icy wind come from behind me. i turned around and saw nothing more then the trees,the road, and the bright moon shining behind me, as i slowly walk on the gray road i hear a swoosh as if someone ran behind me i turned around and saw that no one was behind me so as i wondered what was behind me another swoosh came form behind me so i turned around and i see 2 eyes on the corner of my eye, those eyes stared at me for what seemed like hours until the figure came out from the shadows, then i saw its face. its eyes were bordered in black, its mouth it looked as if this creature had used a knife and carved a smile into its cheeks, it formed a smile that looked like it was made by a demon. then it said this, it said this in a way only a madman would say it " go to sleep" then i saw it had a Bowie knife in its hand. both its hand and knife was dripping with blood and it had blood splattered on its blue hoodie and its eyes were staring at me as if i was a light and its eyes are fixed on it, then suddenly it ran after me holding the knife in a position were if it caught up to me it would throw the knife and the knife would be driven into the area it it was aiming for. as i was running i didn't look back as i believed it would slow me down. as i ran i heard a laugh, a laugh whose voice sounded like that of a demon made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. i stopped by a tree, rested and looked back. the creature wasn't there, all i could see was the mist and the darkness of the night, i sighed with relief as i slowly sit down in front of the tree, i rub my hair as i ponder the fearful experience i just had. a minute goes by i look back again to see nothing but mist and darkness. i get up and stand by the tree wondering what to do next i was to frightened to walk back up the road so i climb the tree, the tree is so large you can make a large-sized treehouse. i rest on the largest branch but as i'm laying down i get this weird feeling as if someone was watching me but then the feeling goes away so i lay on the branch long enough for my burning muscles to relax